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Dec. 9th, 2004 12:15 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
aquabeanWhat could be the start of a longer Saiyuki fic. Written during a staff meeting, I was just thinking about escaping. Apparently my Hakkai Muse agreed.
In 100 years no one would remember. Or at least, no one would remember the truth. Crusading monks and daemons, and gods who came down and walked the Earth, would be nothing more than fairy tales. In a thousand years it wouldn’t be remembered at all.
He wondered if he would still be around in 1000 years. He wondered if anyone would remember him.
In the years that had passed since the end of the minus wave, those youki who had survived had gone into hiding. Those that had survived.
When the wave receded it had left devastation in its wake. Bodies littering the countryside, towns filled with nothing but corpses, all ravaged by a madness whose cure had, perhaps, been worse than the affliction itself.
No one had told them that this was how it would end. They had thought they were saving the world. Hadn’t realized they were only saving one world. A world in which youki had no place.
There's something tickling the back of mind about this...would anyone actually read it, if I wrote a sort of future piece from this?
In 100 years no one would remember. Or at least, no one would remember the truth. Crusading monks and daemons, and gods who came down and walked the Earth, would be nothing more than fairy tales. In a thousand years it wouldn’t be remembered at all.
He wondered if he would still be around in 1000 years. He wondered if anyone would remember him.
In the years that had passed since the end of the minus wave, those youki who had survived had gone into hiding. Those that had survived.
When the wave receded it had left devastation in its wake. Bodies littering the countryside, towns filled with nothing but corpses, all ravaged by a madness whose cure had, perhaps, been worse than the affliction itself.
No one had told them that this was how it would end. They had thought they were saving the world. Hadn’t realized they were only saving one world. A world in which youki had no place.
There's something tickling the back of mind about this...would anyone actually read it, if I wrote a sort of future piece from this?
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read fic deeply confused
Date: 2004-12-09 08:25 pm (UTC)