like a little snapshot, just a hundred brief words framing up this gorgeous image of a chance moment in time with hints at things beyond the conscious awareness.
Which is exactly what I was going for. *is very pleased* I'm so glad that you think it's what I've managed to do. I mean, it's great to think that these characters might meet up and go on other adventures, but I think it's just -- almost more, if you're talking about a drabble -- interesting if they meet, but don't end up being together in any form. Like this. Sanzo sees this moment and some cord is struck, but I don't see him tracking down that dancer. And Hakkai for his part, would likely never even know he was there.
Ah, the unfinished moment...one of my favorite writing cliches ;D
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Date: 2004-12-18 12:19 am (UTC)Which is exactly what I was going for. *is very pleased* I'm so glad that you think it's what I've managed to do. I mean, it's great to think that these characters might meet up and go on other adventures, but I think it's just -- almost more, if you're talking about a drabble -- interesting if they meet, but don't end up being together in any form. Like this. Sanzo sees this moment and some cord is struck, but I don't see him tracking down that dancer. And Hakkai for his part, would likely never even know he was there.
Ah, the unfinished moment...one of my favorite writing cliches ;D
(p.s. I still love my icons!)