Oh! Also, I wanted it to seem almost like this was a scene that had yet to happen. As though, if it is Hakkai remembering, he's still hoping that there might be other scenes with Kannan. "Would" is one of those wonderful words that allows for either future or past, remembering or imagining -- I don't know that I'm making any sense any more, but yeah...
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Date: 2004-12-20 02:25 pm (UTC)*wanders off to think about this some more*